Sunday 12 March 2017

Feedback From Class On Our Prezi Of Our Thriller Idea


Feedback:

- Classmates said the Prezi was unclear and not cohesive and therefore made each bullet point of the opening sequence seem like a different scene. 

-They also said after they saw the story board it helped to clarify the main features of the sequence and helped them to understand the idea.

-Additionally, they also elaborated that they extremely liked the idea of the cross cut to the mafia boss in a different location to show his superiority. This therefore showing that the two mafia workers (part of the family) shown in one of the cross cuts are clearly working for the mafia boss, giving the basis of the rest of the film.

-After receiving the valuable feedback we will edit our Prezi and even add additional detail, making it much clearer and cohesive including all of the camera shots, editing techniques, mise-en-scene and sound.

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